Doc - some minor fixes on the sentences

Reviewed-By: TrustMe

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc b/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
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--- a/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
+++ b/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
@@ -697,10 +697,11 @@
 
     \snippet tutorials/addressbook/part5/finddialog.h FindDialog header
 
-    We define a public function, \c getFindText() for use by classes that
-    instantiate \c FindDialog, which allows them to obtain the text
-    entered by the user. A public slot, \c findClicked(), is defined to
-    handle the search string when the user clicks the \gui Find button.
+    We define a public function, \c getFindText(), to be used by classes that
+    instantiate \c FindDialog. This function allows these classes to obtain the
+    search string entered by the user. A public slot, \c findClicked(), is also
+    defined to handle the search string when the user clicks the \gui Find
+    button.
 
     Lastly, we define the private variables, \c findButton, \c lineEdit
     and \c findText, corresponding to the \gui Find button, the line edit
@@ -715,15 +716,15 @@
 
     \snippet tutorials/addressbook/part5/finddialog.cpp constructor
 
-    We set the layout and window title, as well as connect the signals
-    to their respective slots. Notice that \c{findButton}'s
-    \l{QPushButton::clicked()}{clicked()} signal is connected to to
-    \c findClicked() and \l{QDialog::accept()}{accept()}. The
-    \l{QDialog::accept()}{accept()} slot provided by QDialog hides
-    the dialog and sets the result code to \l{QDialog::}{Accepted}.
-    We use this function to help \c{AddressBook}'s \c findContact() function
-    know when the \c FindDialog object has been closed. This will be
-    further explained when discussing the \c findContact() function.
+    We set the layout and window title, as well as connect the signals to their
+    respective slots. Notice that \c{findButton}'s \l{QPushButton::clicked()}
+    {clicked()} signal is connected to to \c findClicked() and
+    \l{QDialog::accept()}{accept()}. The \l{QDialog::accept()}{accept()} slot
+    provided by QDialog hides the dialog and sets the result code to
+    \l{QDialog::}{Accepted}. We use this function to help \c{AddressBook}'s
+    \c findContact() function know when the \c FindDialog object has been
+    closed. We will explain this logic in further detail when discussing the
+    \c findContact() function.
 
     \image addressbook-tutorial-part5-signals-and-slots.png