Doc - beautified some of the existing sentences in Part 6

Reviewed-By: TrustMe

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc b/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
index 33832da..95394eb 100644
--- a/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
+++ b/doc/src/tutorials/addressbook.qdoc
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@
 
     \image addressbook-tutorial-part6-save.png
 
-    If \c fileName is not empty, we create a QFile object, \c file with
+    If \c fileName is not empty, we create a QFile object, \c file, with
     \c fileName. QFile works with QDataStream as QFile is a QIODevice.
 
     Next, we attempt to open the file in \l{QIODevice::}{WriteOnly} mode.
@@ -906,18 +906,18 @@
     \image addressbook-tutorial-part6-load.png
 
     If \c fileName is not empty, again, we use a QFile object, \c file, and
-    attempt to open it in \l{QIODevice::}{ReadOnly} mode. In a similar way
-    to our implementation of \c saveToFile(), if this attempt is unsuccessful,
-    we display a QMessageBox to inform the user.
+    attempt to open it in \l{QIODevice::}{ReadOnly} mode. Similar to our
+    implementation of \c saveToFile(), if this attempt is unsuccessful, we
+    display a QMessageBox to inform the user.
 
     \snippet tutorials/addressbook/part6/addressbook.cpp loadFromFile() function part2
 
     Otherwise, we instantiate a QDataStream object, \c in, set its version as
     above and read the serialized data into the \c contacts data structure.
-    Note that we empty \c contacts before reading data into it to simplify the
-    file reading process. A more advanced method would be to read the contacts
-    into temporary QMap object, and copy only the contacts that do not already
-    exist in \c contacts.
+    The \c contacts object is emptied before data is read into it to simplify
+    the file reading process. A more advanced method would be to read the
+    contacts into a temporary QMap object, and copy over non-duplicate contacts
+    into \c contacts.
 
     \snippet tutorials/addressbook/part6/addressbook.cpp loadFromFile() function part3